I do not really use metacommentary in my unit three piece at all. I think adding some to my work would definitely make it longer. I also think that my thoughts and ideas would come across more clearly to the reader. This would make my point more descriptive.
Metacommentary I could add:
But above all, the teepee pavilion is a popular attraction in the park and deserves the right to be saved.
In other words, tearing down the pavilion and replacing it with two new ones would change the astetic of the park. It would lose its unique layout.
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